- Long ago there was a village of shigusen that fell under attack by a horde of bandits. The bandits were pillaging the homes, burning the village, and killing the citizens until there was nothing left. Two brothers manage to escape the burning wreckage and set out on an adventure to find a new home and someday be able to avenge their loved ones who were killed. The two brother's names were Mizzoupyro and Nniol(see avatars in the arena), like many siblings these two had different opinions on just about everything, this lead to a problem at the beginning of the adventure when they came upon a fork in the road. Nniol felt they should go left, while Mizzoupyro thought that the right path was the way to go. The brothers both had a strong resolve in their decision and decided the best way to settle matters was to take their own path. (10 years later) both brothers had settled down into their own lives, in their own villages. Both still had the resolve to make due with their promise to avenge the loved ones who had lost their lives to the bandits. As fate would have it in the towns they occupied had started to feud with each other. The final stage had been agreed upon by the two village leaders, that the strongest warriors would have duel to decide who won. On that morning the two brothers stood on the battle field surprised, that their opponent would be each other. (This is where YOU the people decide the fate of the brothers; in your comment whether the brothers fight each other for the sake of their new home or walk away and fulfill their promise together)
- by mizzoupyro |
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- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Brother's Feud
- Artist: mizzoupyro
- Description: two feuding villages may cause two brothers to fight each other, while trying achieve their a promise made to each other (You Choose).
- Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: brothers feud
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- Naoto the Ace Defective - 04/23/2009
- Whoa! I love stories that allow you to chose endings !This is good no-great ! I'm writing a story slightly like this it's working title is war of the brothers One thing though a little more detail would be better.please let them avenge their love ones ,it'll be interesting!
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