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"Hey, uh. Can you tell me what word that says? The one before decimals, please?" He asks, leaning towards me a little.
"Uh, sure. Why not," I say looking at the board once and to my book again. "It says 'every'."
"Thanks," he says curtly.
After a few moments, he asks me again, and since i know it by heart [since i have photographic memory whee ] i tell him without looking from my favorite book, Eclipse. Right when i thought that he stopped and i was about to offer him my notebook, he starts to lean towards me. I lean the other way, but a little way too much. I fall over and he grabs my hand to pull me back up but it didnt work. i fell along with him. I closed my eyes before we hit the ground.
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Everything went blank. Where am i? Who am I? what happend?
i find the strngth to open my eyes, and i feel something in my hand. i look at it with my p-vision. its someone's hand. a soft warm hand entwined with my fingers. i look straight up, and i feel a heavy warm body over me. i look at the face of the body, and it's owned by a guy.
"Are you okay?" he asks with cold fresh breath coming out through his lips while he speaks. i dont know what to say. Ouch. My head hurts.
"Um, who are you? Where am I? Whats happening? Ouch. My head hurts." i say confused. he gets up with his hand still in mine. he sweeps me off my feet in one swift movement, and i'm in his arms.
"It's okay. Dont worry. i'll take you to the nurse. Maybe she can help you." he says.
"But--" he interrupts me with his finger.
"dont worry. lets go." he walks out of the room still with me in his arms.
- Title: Amnesia
- Artist: iCuramba
- Description: this is a passage i have in one of these little stories ive been planning to write in my notebook. the story is called 'Sided Love'. it's about a girl that gets amnesia right after she meets a guy and he has to find a way to get it back. it's basically his fault for her to get amnesia because, you know. well, just read on. im hoping to finish it and for people to like it. ~i hope you like it. please comment and rate!! oh. i'll prolly put more that might happen in the story here. so, yeah.
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: amnesia falling hurt surprised
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Comments (6 Comments)
- etcetera123omg - 12/28/2009
- i agree wif red roses
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- Julia Dream - 12/26/2008
- Do NOT EVER use emoticons in a story! Practice your spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization, and go study a novel for how to write dialogue. Your actual written style is very repetitive.
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- iCuramba - 07/31/2008
- yeh. i did change it a little bit, but this one is a lot better.
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- Consumed by Love - 07/31/2008
- I see you changed it a bit, I think. I don't remember much when I read this in your notebook.
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- shed tears_ of blood - 07/31/2008
- heh, nice. I liked it better..okay no i like both. OH OH!!! me too!!!....i wanna know what happens!!!
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- red roses and blue blood - 07/31/2008
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That was great. smile
I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! TEL ME! I MUST KNOW!
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