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Hailey’s pov
I was lying on my stomach playing games on my cell phone when two of my bestfriends burst through the door. “HAILEY” Angeline and Brooke yelled. I jumped up and put my hand to my chest. “WHAT THE ********!” I yelled startled by their interruption. “Sorry but, anyways guess what!” Angeline said excitedly. “What?” I asked. “Turn the radio on Brooke.” Angeline said. “Sit down Hailey.” “Is this some sort of intervention? Cause I haven’t done anything bad lately. I’M INNOCENT!” I yelled. “SHUT UP!” Brooke yelled turning up the volume. I shut my mouth and pouted. ” touchstones production are holding auditions for their new reality show called around the world in a tourbus come by the touchstones productions building to audition only 13-20 year olds are allowed”
Angeline’s pov
“so what’s about it?” Hailey asked after we heard the auditions for around the world in a tourbus “we are so gonna join!” me and Brooke exclaimed “what’s the noise all about? you guys I’m talking to someone here” miley said as she walked in the living room “we are gonna audition for around the world in a tourbus!” I said “what? Why?” miley asked “because we need the money” Brooke said “and it’ll be fun” Hailey said “no I mean why go through all the trouble of auditioning when my manager already got us in!” miley said and we all screamed and jumped on the couch
after 10 minutes of screaming and jumping
“I can’t believe it how’d you do that miley?” I asked her “my manager did that not me” she answered “this is just gonna be awesome!” I exclaimed “tell me about it” Hailey said “yeah and if we win we’ll have tons of money” Brooke said “yeah we can finally have our own home” I said “oh yeah!” we all said and high-fived
3rd person pov
Nick, Kevin and joe stepped out of their car followed by their bodyguard to the touchstones productions building to audition for their new show around the world in a tourbus. Girls were screaming all around them and jumping. The three boys just smirked to them selves already used to the sight. They entered the building and was greeted by the cold wind from the ac and the frantic people around them they followed the sign which said around the world in a tourbus audition when they got to the room all eyes were on them. They sat down on the chair until they were called. They had their audition and immediately got the part because they were famous and everything.
3 days later
Angeline’s pov
ok so I’m taking this, this oh! And this one I thought as I packed my stuff for the contest it was in 3 days. “ hey Adeline! what are you doing?” hailey asked “packing stuff” I replied “why the contest isn’t starting in 3 days” she said “I know but I want to be prepared” I said “whatever floats your boat” she said and went out me and miley’s room “hey angel! Why are you packing already?” she asked flopping down my bed “just to be prepared” I answered “hmm I’ll go pack too” she said and got out her suitcase.
- Title: around the world in a tourbus
- Artist: adeline03
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this is the 1st chapter and this is mine!!!!!!!!!!
jonas brothers fanfiction - Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- brownie asplosion - 07/16/2008
- yeah its kinda hard to follow...
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- The Electricity - 07/16/2008
- It's difficult to read. Go back and capitalize the beginning letter of all names, the beginning of each sentence. When someone else talks you generally need to start a new paragraph. The characters are flat and boring. Just keep working on it though.
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