Fly On

• Artist: Mewshiny
• Description: this is about my caricter from maximum ride
  she i very special
  i can't get all the story on here i'm to bored to spend all day typeing
• Date: 10/26/2008
• Tags: maxlilyflyon

Begining

I have to stay ahead or... i triped it was abput the worst thing i could possibly do right now sweatdrop
Here's an up to time summery: i'm running through the woods trying to get away from some guys that have guns and wanted to kill me, on top of that i just tripped. crying
after a short amount of running i came to a cliff and i jumped right off of it and spread my wings (you heard me right wings) cool
they shot at me hit me a few times i began to fall my wings hurt to much to keep flaping all i could do was spin blindly out of control to my aproaching demise xp

i was alive
i woke up in a cave, i wasn't dead, i wasn't being chased, and most importantly, i wasn't alone. on the inside i was like gonk rofl scream crying scream mad burning_eyes but on the outside stare ninja

Comments

[Faryata]

not as great as i imagined but good at that just lose the emotes pleze

[Loveless the Ponyo Onion]

2/5.. Sorry. By replacing the words with emotes, you took away all of the imagery authors create for their stories... And please amend your spelling.

[Julia Dream]

Not worth the 100 gold it cost to put it in the arena.

[Mewshiny]

i don't care if it looks professional or not

[paragraph palaces]

If you want your story to look any kind of professional, I suggest you brush up on your spelling and lose the emotes. Words can be used to make those images!

[lippser]

kewl! 3/5