- Title: Comic 1~ Suckish Rhyme
- Artist: iiNaoki
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Description:
It took a good while for me to think up draw out and color. This is my first submission and first of it's kind (Four-panel comic) that I've ever made. I know that it isn't all that funny, but please no unreasonably harsh comments.
These two are bro and sis. The girl is "Trixie" (13 yrs.) and the boy is "Teddy" (16 yrs.). (The characters are named after my two, brother and sister, terriers.) I hope you all enjoy it!
Please comment on what I might need to improve on and what you like. <=3 - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: funny comic akita shibuki
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Hi im Riven - 12/27/2008
- eh? o.o?
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- _shyanna_r_j_ - 12/17/2008
- its ok but you need to make the words more cler
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- G-MODSERVER3 - 12/16/2008
- big bros an idiot isnt he?
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- The BLAM Guild Mule - 12/14/2008
- lol thats funny!
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- Gods_Bride - 07/18/2008
- its pretty funny
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- Manimapally - 07/17/2008
- this time i sorta agree with emokid O.o
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- death_on_swift_wings901 - 07/17/2008
- kinda hard to read but its ok
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