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- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: Good Guy Vs. Bad Guy in Dream
- Artist: halo91_91_
- Description: i was thinking of making a new comic so here is the title^.^=
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: good dream
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Balnibarbi - 12/31/2008
- The girl's eyes are a little off, making her head look a tad wonky. But I like the composition, and I love the way you shaded the glasses.
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- swingwell - 12/31/2008
- it looks incomplete. the measurment of the eyes and the forehead are a tad odd and the girl's face needs to be fixed, along with the body, but the legs look good. sorry but i study art, can't help it.
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- XxXMoonNightJBeastVxX - 12/28/2008
- it's very good. loved the shadings but you should have made a lot of details. i give you a 4/5.
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- Hi im Riven - 12/27/2008
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great shading. the males look really detailed, so is the girl, but her face shape is off a little. anyways, I'd still give you a 5/5 because of the penicl-like shading.
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- Srsly Sxe - 12/27/2008
- its awesome 5/5
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- Jecx_Sato - 12/27/2008
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other than those minor indiscreprancys, it looks great! the body proportions are perfect and personally I like that (head isn't too big) I also like the person to the right. I hope you take my comment to heart and continue to draw
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- Jecx_Sato - 12/27/2008
- Great! love the shading and the whole set-up. a few things bother me though.... on the right side there is.....nothing. that's probably what you where going for (considering the left is black) but I suggest that you put some sort of design, something simple so that there isn't this overpowering white "glare". also the girl in the middle... her eyes are a tad off (A little far spaced).
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