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La Poema:The Journal of a Poet, a Lover, and a Lost Soul
hahahahaha! You have entered my journal! The journal of a poet, a lover, and a lost soul if you haven't figureed that out already!! Have fun!
The First Night
The sun falls.
Stars fill the skys.
I look up at each one.
Recognizing the first night.
The first night with you.
It was a star filled night.
And we sat under the stars.
Talking.
Talking about everything.
Talking about nothing.
Talking about life
And love.
That first night,
Stays fresh in my mind.
It was the first night,
That I realized,
Who I was meant to be with.
For the rest of my life.

From the brief collections of Kaito

This is just something I thought up off on the spot. It is a weird poem. Nothing special. I actually think it is quite bad.
Comment and Critisize please!!


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    XscreamXyerXheartXoutX
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    Mon Dec 25, 2006 @ 04:43am


    aww! its not that bad sweatdrop


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