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Quote: This is the first chapter in my book. Please tellme what you think. If you think I should add something, please tell me. Enjoy rofl
Chapter 1
-Attack from New Worlds-
Felipe and Macyer
This story didn’t just start at a house and kids figuring out they aren’t from our time, no, this story began long before anybody from your family were even born (In other words its 1779). The War for Independents was going on and everyone will always talk about it. During this time, broadcast started to announce missing children from Mexico, Brazil, and all of Central and South America! But the story I will tell all started in a little part of France where a boy lived in a palace with his father and brother. Now, this boy’s name was Felipe Crusero and his brother’s name was Macyer Crusero. Felipe was about six feet tall. He loved poetry and reading books. Generally you’ll see him reading a book in the balcony or even writing a love song for his dream girl. He also had black hair and green eyes, and, you can say his eyes were so green, it looked a meadow. He was said to be really handsome, but really, he always saw himself like everyone else. Now his brother on the other hand, was only five feet tall. He loved gamboling with adults and winning all their money. He was mostly that type of kids who wish there were no rules and being free to do whatever they want. But, sometimes you’ll actually see him reading a book or do his homework and stuff like that. One day came to the boys that they both wished would never happen, “Papa, you said you weren’t going to war ever again!” said Felipe with and angry voice, “Mais oui, I told you that, but, if I don’t we won’t have enough money for your tuition”. Felipe got really mad at his father ever since his father made him a solder and when his mother passed away. Felipe’s mother had promised him he could go to any school he wanted to when he was older, but, that promise was made about ten years ago when his mother was still alive, but now Felipe is sixteen and his brother is fifteen. Felipe ran to his room suddenly he heard a loud noise that sounded like death right next to him. BANG!!! Felipe heard a gun shot. He ran down the stairs as fast as he could, and he sees his brother lying on his knees next to his father crying hysterically. “What happened Macy?!” he screamed, “He’s dead!” These words echoed in his head; he couldn’t believe it, his father had just died, but, then he heard a noise. A shadow of a man was lurking behind him. A horrible feeling went down his spine. He took hold of his brother’s hand and ran. Felipe ran up the stairs as fast as he could. Suddenly the man started to shot at him! He then shot Felipe in the leg! As soon as he got to his room he saw something that looked like a door outside of his window. “Macy jump and I’ll follow” “Are you crazy? I’ll kill myself!” “JUST DO IT!” So both boys jumped and then flash Felipe started to open his eyes to find out that he was in a different world. “Phil…Where are we?” asked Macy with a scared voice, “I have no ide…are we speaking a different language or is it a figment of my imagination?” “No…we are speaking anther language…COOL!” said the boy with a how do you say, a very happy voice. Then suddenly Macy said, “Uh, Phil…you’re a three year old,” he said with a two year old tone of voice “Oh yeah well you’re a two year old to me,” he said with a three year old accent. Then a gust of wind came freezing the two little ones. Then out of the mist come a husband and wife who saw the two boys dieing in the cold. “Well look what we have here dear,” said the wife to her husband in French, “Two little boys,” “Lets put them inside in the warmth,” he said back, “Good idea,” she said. They picked both boys off the ground and went walking to their home. Little Felipe looked back as he saw the portal disappear as his little eyes closed and he fell asleep. About one year with the couple came to the boys. The couple to them where known as mama and papa. One day as little Felipe was playing with his brother, both of them saw a strange man coming closer to them. “Why, what do we have here! To little hokkies playing around!” said the man. Felipe got scared and called his father, “Papa! Papa! Someone is here!” he yelled. “Uh…….how may I help you sir?” “Ah yes! You’re the man I wanted to see! Is your wife home as well?” “Yes sir……she is home……why do you ask?” “Oh nothing……can I please talk to you and your wife alone?” “Sure? You may?” Felipe and Macy got worried and helped each other up the window. Suddenly as both look they see their parents sitting still. It’s been 3 hours and the boy where still out side. Suddenly the man leaves, but, before he left, he patted both boys on the head and said, “Don’t worry everything will be to come.” Felipe didn’t get what the man was telling him nether did Macy. When both boys went inside they saw their parents sitting still. Felipe started to call them but they wouldn’t answer him. So both boys got closer to their parents. Macy, who was in front of Felipe, stepped on something that looked red and felt like water. “ITS BLOOD!!!” yelled Felipe! With tears down their faces both boys ran out of the house (witch really was a tree trunk) down to humelf territory (find out more later). Then, with tears in their eyes they couldn’t even see were they where going, they bumped into a group of humelves who were traveling back home. All Felipe wanted was a hug also did Macy, and so both boys hugged the first person they hit. The average humelf would have killed them than ate them, but, instead, seeing that these to little ones where in pain, one of them said to the other, “Sohaba khaba lhaba?” (should we take them with us?) than the other said, “Kuhaba taba ataba thbaba diaba ohaba.” (sure, look at them they’ll die out here). So the to men and the other humelves took the two boys home.
José, Ricardo, Rita, and Kowalski
Now, let’s say that you are half Mexican on your mother’s side of the family and half American on your father’s side of the family, well I knew three kids that were, and their names where Ricardo (Rico), Rita, and Kowalski (Kwally). Now Ricardo was the oldest; he had just turn seventeen but, he didn’t like birthdays because of what happened to his mother. One thing about Ricardo is that he wasn’t so high in height or so small, he, how you can say, was right in the middle. He had blackish-brownish hair and had green-brownish eyes (said to be his mother’s eyes). He loved sports especially baseball and football. One thing you will see him do was running in the mornings and eating lots of food; in some way you can say he loved food more than he loved sports. Though he was, how all the girl’s say ‘cute’ he was kinda like Felipe, thought himself like everyone else. Now Rita the second oldest of the three was actually the wisest of the three. She knew how to control her emotions so well her father always put her in charge. She was a peace giving type of girl. She was so good to everyone that some people actually gave her some money knowing that she will take good care of it. She was as beautiful as her mother and
had golden eyes, she also knew four different languages: English, Spanish, French, and Jewish. Last but not lest, Kowalski Jr. Now this kid knew pretty cool things. He was a four feet tall eleven year old who loved to play practical jokes on the whole family. Sometimes he will put a little bomb in your soup without you knowing its there, a then BOOM! You’ll see him laughing his head off. Though his little big blue eyes look at you, you can’t even punish such a cute face. To tell you the truth he looks more like Ricardo every day. Now, I know what you’re thinking ‘what did happen to their mom’ well here it is; their, mother was a seventeen year old Mexican girl who went to America with her family to make money. She meet a young twenty your old man who happen to be called Kowalski Richards. About two years later she married him and had a son (not Ricardo). She always told her son stories about were she came from, but people saw her crazy. She will say “I came from a place called Kidren Planet” but nobody seemed to listen or even care. Five years later she had her second son, then the next year she had her first daughter, but, when she had her last child, five years after her daughter, a man that thought she was so crazy, that he shot her. People thought that she really died, but, I won’t tell you more of the story for you will see what happens next. Two days before Christmas Eve Ricardo’s father had something dreadful to say. “Children, I need to go to war again.” “But dad you said you retired form all that nonsense!” said Ricardo with an angry voice. “Yes I know, but, you see my general died mysteriously and his son’s disappeared and now our new general wants everyone to go.” Ricardo felt so sad because his father was an old man and he couldn’t fight because he’ll kill himself, and because he was very sick. “Rico don’t worry dads’ goin’ to be all right you’ll see.” Rita said to her brother to make him fell better. Ricardo felt a little better because he had his sister and brother there with him. “Well I’m go’na to leave ya’ll three with your older brother José.” He said with a very happy voice. “WHAT!!! We have an older brother and you never told us!!!” said Kwally. Their father’s face turned pale as he put a small smile on his face. “Well, you see, your mother and I wanted to keep it a secret because your brother had to flee this part of Boston and…” “Dad you mean to tell us that you lied to us for the last seventeen years not knowing that we are actually FOUR KIDS!!!” said Rita with a really strong voice. “Yes, I’m sorry we thought that you three will not understand.” “Well that’s over, we have plans that have to be made and we have to get ready to leave tomorrow,” said Rita with a disappointed face. “Well before ya’ll three get ready to pack I’ve got your Christmas percents.” He grabbed a bag behind the rocking chair next to the fire place. In the bag there were three gifts. The first one was a book for Kwally, “What does it say?” said young Kowalski for he couldn’t read; “Try to spell it out” said their father gently to help his son out. “It spells S-T-O-R-Y T-E-L-L-E-R-S,” said the boy slowly. “Good Job, now, this is for you Rita.” Rita opened her gift and saw the most beautiful necklace that you would ever see. It was heart shaped and had a little photo of her mother inside. “Is that mom?” she asked her father; “Yes that was her locket and she wanted to give it to you before she died,” “Thank you so much! I’ll keep it on forever!” But Ricardo had a sad face on. It looked like the same face when his mother passed away. “I didn’t forget about you son,” His father got out a compass that looked like a necklaces. The compass was some what small and it was a grayish color. “Thanks dad, I’ll keep it safe,” said Ricardo, “Now, the day you have a son give it to him so he can know who his granddad was, ok?” “Yea, don’t worry I will dad, I will.” About a week after their father went to war, they were at their brother José’s house. They got to know him while they were there. Now José was about twenty-two, he was a very tall young man about six feet tall. He had many hobby’s; many where fishing, hunting, and constructing. José was said to have a similarity to his mother but the rest was from his father. He had black eyes and really dark brown hair. Though he was said to be a ‘ladies man’ he always saw that as a bunch of nonsense. But one sad day come to the four as José read a letter out loud saying that their father died because he got very ill. Little Kwally had tears running down his cheeks. “Does that mean we are orphans?” said the little crying boy. Kowalski Jr. was only eleven years old. He didn’t know his mother much because she died when he was only two. “Yes, it means we are orphans Kwally,” quoted José with a sad crack in his voice. Then suddenly on the radio it started to say that children twenty-five and younger where being kidnapped around the world! “That can’t be! How can someone start kidnapping kids around the world, that’s just impossible?!” said Rita with an amazed voice, “Well whoever is doing this must have people working for him, if you know what I mean,” said Kwally. Suddenly one of the windows of the kitchen burst into flames. “See you later freaks, Ha, Ha, Ha!!!” said a voice from outside. “RUN! MOVE, MOVE!!!” said José as if he was the most scared. All four of them ran to the basement and hid from the mysterious man. But then Kwally hit something behind him, “Owww! That hurt like heck! What was that?” Ricardo was curious about what was in the box. “Open it!” he said as if he was the one in charge. “Ok, but whatever is inside maybe we can use it to defend ourselves,” said José. Rita helped Ricardo open it, “It’s a bunch of stupid crap,” said Ricardo “Shut your mouth FO! Never say that again, got that!” said José with a disappointing voice, “Hey I’m not three ok; I say what I want and when I want!” “SHUT THE HECK UP YOU TWO!!! If we want to get out of this alive we have to work together as a family,” said Rita with an angry voice. Then as all of them stood at watch, Ricardo saw something glowing in the box. He started to take out old newspapers and other things in the box and found something that looked like a sword and a pair of chum-nocks, “Hey look what I found!” “What the shiitake mushrooms! That is amazing! What is it?” said Kwally with a confused voice. “I don’t… AHHHHHH!!!” yelled Ricardo. “What is it!” said José, “Look behind you!” “Hello kids, I just stopped by to EXTERMANAT YOU!!! HA, HA, HA!!!” Then out of nowhere something that looked like a door showed right behind them (you may recall herring about something similar in Felipe’s story) “Run in it NOW!” said José. All four of them ran right in it and landed in snow, “Holly crap! Where the heck are we?!” said Kwally, “I have no idea!” said Rita with an amazed voice. Then suddenly a gust of wind blew at them and something amazing happened to Ricardo; his hair turned as white as snow and his eyes turned as blue as the sky! Same thing happened to José and Kwally. They all started to get younger until all were ten, five, four and one. Now the only thing they wanted to do is find a way out!
Deanna, Naomi, Mis, Kino, and
Many others
Now, have you ever heard of an island called Puerto Rico? Well if you do know about it, that’s where I come from! Well this story is about a lot of kids actually. Know I remember that day when I was looking out of my window, seeing all the people dancing and singing and etcetera, but I was mostly looking at the stars until, “Boo!” yelled one of my best friends, his name was Kino. “Contra! You scared me” I said to him. Now to tell you the truth I said this in Spanish but so that you can understand, it’s in English. “Casona! Live a little wont ya’, come on everyone are having fun, come on, come on, come on!” he said as if he was still five years old. To tell you something about this kid is well I can’t explain but he wasn’t white. Yes, Kino was black, but, a cute black kid, for a fifteen year old (no I didn’t like him ok) he was like a brother to me no madder if I already had a crazy retarded little brother that happens to be a super genius. Kino’s hair was white and his eyes were dark blue. He was a young hunter (he practically went hunting 24/7) he hunted with his dad day and night, but also hang out with me and my friend Joseph (yes I was the only girl in this group). I have a sister and a brother who I love very much and their names were Naomi (Na) and Mis, Oh, almost forgot about my two cosines, Joshua (J-Man) and Jessica (J). Yeah my family was cool until the year 1779 came. I remember like if it were yesterday. As you know my friend Kino scared the heck out of me and so forth. When I went to his house (because he forgot his maracas, for his mom) it was the most horrid thing I ever saw. Now, before I continue, have you ever seen a dead person, well, at the moment we went in we saw his father lying dead on the floor. The first reaction I did, for I was only fourteen, was screaming my head off and also Kino. We started to yell for help, and to tell you the truth everyone came. Kino’s mom stared to cry. But then we herd a gun shot from outside! We all ran to see that two other men got shot. I, Kino, Na, Mis, J-Man, J, Kasha (Kino’s twin sister, who happened to be white), and Joseph ran to my house to find out that my dad grabbed his bat and knocked a guy out, “Nice shot Pa!” I said with a sarcastic voice. Then suddenly Kino’s mom gets shot. Kino’s eyes start to water, “I lost everyone in my family, except for my twin sister, in one day! Can it get worse!” he said as his tears went away. Suddenly my hand went through the wall. “What the heck! What’s goin’ on here?” As we all looked behind we saw a portal thing. “Ok,” said my dad, “Go in it, and don’t worry about us we will be fine,” “Pero Pa…” Mis said, “Pero nada! Go now!” Tears went down our faces as we said good-bye to our family’s as we went in. Suddenly we were falling into a forest. “Ooowwwwwwwwwwww! What hit me?” I said with a two year old voice. Then as I looked at everyone they were all, little babies, literately! Though I fell asleep to know what happened next, but, I remember waking up in a tree trunk that seemed to be a little house. And there was a group of people that seemed to be a big family, but to tell you something even amazing is since they adopted me, you know Felipe right, well, he was my knew step brother, now that’s creepy! And what was creepier was that I’m related to Macyer! (These creatures are called humelves, half human and half elf; their ears were elf like and they had fangs for grabbing their pray, and Macyer and Felipe were called humawks, half human and half hawk; they have the wings of a bird and the body of a man).
 Zinaki · Tue Jul 11, 2006 @ 03:31am · 0 Comments |
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