I totally forgot that I had forgotten to comment on how BRILLIANT this piece is. Honest to God, my heart shattered with Paris's on the last section- and you portray him so well! The interaction between your characters and Paris was unspeakably AMAZING- and I've got an entire copy of this printed out for my school folder. <3
Honestly, if I were to marry a piece of text, Aly, this would be the one. I swear to God.
I feel so bad for both Mitchy and Paris- and I love how you're the mastery of subtlety when it comes to their chemistry. ; ^ ;
If this wasn't so good, I wouldn't have to feel so bad about my writing.
The amazing thing is, I laughed out loud on numerous occasions- I love how you weave in angst with the fluff. I can't do that.
Aly,
you're the best.
*cries and clings onto your arm*
Honestly, if I were to marry a piece of text, Aly, this would be the one. I swear to God.
I feel so bad for both Mitchy and Paris- and I love how you're the mastery of subtlety when it comes to their chemistry. ; ^ ;
If this wasn't so good, I wouldn't have to feel so bad about my writing.
The amazing thing is, I laughed out loud on numerous occasions- I love how you weave in angst with the fluff. I can't do that.
Aly,
you're the best.
*cries and clings onto your arm*
