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I'm bored now, so I'm going to write a teaser for my new mini story that I won't take anywhere, called Undeniably cruel. Read below, as that is a section from the first chapter, and I think a fairly good piece as well.
At school, all the other girls think Ren is a simply adorable and wonderful boy, simply because he is pretty. Although, I can understand their mistakes. He is pretty, with his silky black hair that droops just over his golden eyes, the eyes that seem to look straight into your mind, through your head, and know everything about you. And that skin! So smooth, and pale, like undisturbed milk, which he loves to drink. His muscles are large, too, and can hold a girl in a tight embrace. No wonder all the girls think him to be gorgeous.
But I know the truth. He is no pretty boy, naive to the world, who strokes your cheek gently and tells you it will all be all right. He is unkind to Sam and Zila, for they are just 9 and 6, and will not fight back. Whenever he sees a beggar in the street who asks him for money, he laughs and walks on past. And just the other day, a dog that was unlucky enough to be sleeping in his way was kicked with that powerful leg of his. He could have killed it if he kicked it again, he is so strong, so I hit him in the back and yelled to stop. He turned around and called me an ungrateful girl dog, then grabbed me by my hair and continued to drag me home. We didn't go more than 10 feet, though, before he released me and held me by the cheekbones and attempted to apologize. Apologize! To a girl you are supposed to be in love with and have just pulled by the hair until you have pulled out her tears! I slapped him in that silky white skin and ran away, but I could hear him running behind me.
No. I will not marry Ren Chang. Not for my family. Not for anyone.
For he is undeniably cruel.
So there you have it. Like it? There's your teaser.
 xXBisexual FlanXx · Tue Nov 11, 2008 @ 02:15am · 0 Comments |
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