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Crazy Drama
Promise me tomorrow will be a better day
Lost
Tomorrow is a new day
So they say
Life seems to be on a constant loop
Nothing ever changes there is no new scoop
You can't promise me that tomorrow is going to be better
You have not met her
For some...
Tomorrow will never come
Where they tricked, like I
The promise of tomorrow in their mind's eye
While we lay sleeping
The future is ever creeping
Ready to snatch everything away
Or begin a more horrible day
I never want to hear you say
Tomorrow will be better than yesterday

Hope
The sun rises a new day has begun
You realize, put down the gun
Today holds the promise of hope
Climb back down and cut the rope
For yesterday you fell screaming
Last night you lay dreaming
Hope for a new beginning
Again the world is spinning
You have the promise of tomorrow in your heart
Time to get up and honestly start
The life you would have thrown away
The gentle person that made you stay
Kind, honest, heartfelt words can save
Even if tomorrow is like a wave
Don't let your hope slip away
For it is the promise of a new day






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Kricka
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 02, 2008 @ 12:39am
You had me worried with the first one gonk Who's the "her" you referrence?
The rhyming seemed a bit...not cheesy but off on the first one.
The second was fantastic though, especially as a follow-up to the first.

Any inspiration for these, or just something that happened to come outta your pen/pencil/fingers if you're typing?


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 08, 2008 @ 07:02am
I am talking to a guy about myself in the poem, but it is my concience that is talking it is kind weird. Like I am only evil on the inside. So the her is me, and I try to save people while on the inside I am just as ...,what is the word, disturbed as them ready to pull the trigger. I think it is the 3rd and 4th lines that make in sound that way, I'll revide them later.
I have been thinking about suicide more and more. Also death and the darkness within my heart and mind. I try to stay happy with a smile all the time but really somedays I just feel like giving up, but I know that is a cowards way out. It is just that I feel I am evil on the inside and trying to hide it by being kind. I want to transend the mask and truely be a kind person but dark thoughts always slip into my mind.



Dark Moon Princess
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