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Poetic Attempts
just poetry, um.. Personnal thoughts about things whether serious or um.. Stupid.. Otherwise occasional going-ons in my life
Break
It had all been premeditated before hand
This divine wall built atop my dunes of sand
Such an expertly crafted piece of beauty and art
Such an antique that grew familier with my heart
As time grew on and on so did my wall
Who wouldv'e known it would tear down and fall
Thanks to the events of today
In just 3 minutes evertying went grey
So little time it took to take my wall apart
Disbelief, paranoia, anxeity, etc. now consume me
To the happening of one soul consumed with glee
She flashed a smile ever so silent
In an instant I shattered and had to vent
She left flagging victory to her rhythem
To the sadists, I didn't know what to give them
For this was a tremendous sin to reveal
They are now exposed to the world so real
I'm so sorry Judge Sadist, I'll bein anew
Just please don't snuff out all my candles life for I have only few
So now I'm rebuilding Brick by Brick
I just remember I think I'm giong to be sick






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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 08:53am
Hey, this is really good. Takes a while to sink in but I like it. 3nodding


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