This is a musical idea i had a while ago, and decided to write it on gaia. first, i'll do the summary like that deep voiced guy summarizes movies. then, about everyday, i'll write a scene and post it here. you can comment as much as you want.... your critizism is helpful, but keep in mind, this is my first musical writing... i will write the lyrics as they come... thank you! xd
Xemnas, the Superior, was secretly working on an experiment with Vexen. Once the experiment failed, he locked her in a cell, protecting it and the others from her powers. soon, Saix finds the hidden cell and persuades Xemnas to let her out, but with a cost. Saix was now responsible for her safety; if anything were to happen to her, he's be destroyed. so Paxne, the experimental failer, lives a life on the surface while being shadowed by Saix. will she make it till the end? what does Xemnas need her for? why does she not remember what happened to her before being locked away? and how will the others "feel" with her snooping around in their lifes?
well, that's it... tell me how that is please! i hope you enjoy it!
marluxiasflower · Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 02:57am · 1 Comments |