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It was actually a picture i saw and a song that inspired me to write this but as all of my poetry it speaks mostly of emotion and an experience i have had. I am very proud of this poem i put a lot of thought and effort into it i hope it pays off. I hope you enjoy it.
There is a gaping hole in my chest
Bloody jagged flesh
Is what you left behind
When you ripped out my beating heart.
I am empty
I am heartless
There is no feeling left in my body
I feel nothing but pain and suffering
This wound will never heal
Over Tim the pain ha eased
But I can still feel
The burning in the jagged hole
The yearning to fill its emptiness.
But never again will i be complete.
I am heartless.
Not only am I heartless
But brainless
For falling into your hands
Playing right into your diabolical plans
I was so blind
Never did I see
Exactly what you had in store for me
I gave you everything
And what did i get?
A deep black hole
Where my heart use to be.
Im unrepairable
barley stable
In between alive and dead
Human and not
For what use am I?
Who am I?
Without a heart.
One word to describe this
Heartless.
Yet I can not find a thing to miss
Maybe the dark abyss in my chest
is for the best.
No emotions
Never again will i be hurt
Never again will I be broken
You can't break a heart that isn't there
You can't rip someones heart out if they are
Heartless.
- by XxKitty_of_DeathxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/18/2011 |
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- Title: Heartless
- Artist: XxKitty_of_DeathxX
- Description: I wrote this by a picture and a song and from my own experience. I hope you enjoy it.
- Date: 01/18/2011
- Tags: heartless
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Fantastic Nightmares - 02/17/2011
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ok.... whitewidow something..... i dont get it. I liked it. Hey read my poems! smile comment!
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- Annalie Rose - 01/27/2011
- i think that if u read it like ur really angry, its a totally beast poem! smile
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- MercuryTheRipper - 01/20/2011
- its not bad but it needs more sort of flow its a bit jagged meaning as you read it doesnt move it just stays still try to add more assonance and maybe even alliteration to try and make it flow a bit better
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