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I feel the Kiss of eternal darkness
Black as a night of the eclipse
Forever more I close my eyes
Tenderly embraced by this baleful lover
O how I long for the touch of my beloved
The fates are cruel to make me Dante
With her, my beatrice
Forever more my eyes stay closed
- Title: Moonlight Lover
- Artist: VvryukvV
- Description: I think I can call this particular poem my magnum opum of all my poerty I've ever written. I don't care about rating I would like to hear your comments and criticism of my work.
- Date: 05/06/2010
- Tags: moonlight lover
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BloodStainLoveStory - 05/20/2010
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Very good my friend. 5/5
Check out my work. It would be greatly appreciated. - Report As Spam
- serenitys memory - 05/11/2010
- It's great, keep on writing because you're amazing. (:
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- hannah-vampire7 - 05/11/2010
- i like it
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- Yiling Laozu - 05/06/2010
- I Love Your Poem. It's very beautiful and strong. Very nice work. [:
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