I miss you

• Artist: princess Of death X_x
• Description: I wrote this poem on the 28th of april,I was feeling down an my boyfriend had left me.It just came to me an i wrote it down,It originaly stopped at "its only been an hour since i last herd your voice ..." but I really didnt want it to end so quickly an i added more yesterday ( the 30th of april).Please comment an tell me what i should change.Im using it for a project for english so i want it perfect <3 thanks (:
  
  
• Date: 05/02/2010
• Tags: miss alone heartbroken crying

I miss you

Like a soul without a body
Like a bird without a nest
Like a dog without a bone

I’m incomplete without you an your silly songs
Your touch your smell all so close to home

My heart is throbbing my eyes a crying
But one thing’s for sure…
I’m better off

Ill cherish ever moment every touch every kiss
Sure I’ll cry for thee with my hands in a fist.
I’ll always love you, but I must hide the pain.

I’m better off without an your silly grin even if thee brightened my day.

Three day you changed my life,
Three days ill always carry,
It would of been four an we could of gotten married

Surly u think I’m crazy but Love is strange,
I have to forget thee even if my hands are in a painful fist.

In three minuets I fell for you in an hour your embrace,
in a day my love for you was stronger then the golden gates
Three dreadful days an I was left alone on the fourth,
You said you’d always be there but u’ve left me without hope.

It’s only been an hour since I last herd your voice….

Im a gun without a bullet
A song without a beat
A monster with no closet

Im incomplete without you

An my hands are in a fist

Comments

[Robby Starships]

MMAANN OMG DAT STD MADE ME TEAR UP A LITTLE BIT