Tears

• Artist: BackiiMuphin
• Description: Well, here's another piece...
• Date: 03/12/2010
• Tags: tears hopeless broken apathy backiimuphin

Every night, tears brim, and fall.
It's all because of him.
I /Want/ to see him, even one last time.
I'm almost terrified that I'm losing control.
I notice I've become distant and depressed.
Anger swells inside me, and it's /so/ hard to suppress it now.
I hate feeling this way.
I feel like a hopeless child clinging onto their mother.
Thinking of him again, the tears flow freely.
I'm showing up at school, but it's not the same.
An apathy for all my classes are consuming me.
I'm falling into numbness, deeper and deeper.
The only thing that's still existent of human nature, are these tears that stain my clothes, every night.
Every night.

Comments

[BackiiMuphin]

Actually, this poem is quite Melodramatic.
The feelings are there yes, but they read to me as over exaggerated. ^^'
Glad you liked it though! It prolly applies to others more than me.

[raybunny]

wow it takes courage to put your feelings out there 4 people to read your emotions 4 that i applaud u p.s. the poem was very deep i hope everyone under stands it

[BackiiMuphin]

Aha, thanks.

[Echo Ligeia]

I felt that it was very honest. The detachment with which you wrote your poem makes the reader see your point of view clearly, while still demonstrating your pain. It made me feel a little hopeless smile - which is a very good thing; your poem was relatable.