Regret

• Artist: PUNKROCK EROTICA
• Description: Please comment and rate.
• Date: 02/09/2010
• Tags: regret

I regret losing her, not being able to watch her walk as she does. Her hips moving in a perfect motion. I regret not being able to look into her perfect hazel brown eyes, the way they lit up when the sun hit them. And everytime She looked to the sun I fell even more in love.
Her smile, me me laugh, her smile, oh the face she made when she smiled. It was adorable. Her laugh was stunning. Her hand would hold my hand so tight she never wanted me to leave. She always wanted me close. And I always wanted to be close to her.
Her body was the picture of perfection. She was my perfection. She was mine and even though I don't have her anymore she'll always be my baby. I loved her so much. I regret not staying. I regret losing her. I regret, regreting.

Comments

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Vary your sentence structure. You also have some fragments. Clean up those spelling errors.

[Nights of Nyx]

Try not writing she she she she i i i i all the time cause it starts to get boring. but otherwise good