Ocean Life

• Artist: Mistress Mae
• Description: Down in the depths of the ocean
• Date: 01/31/2010
• Tags: ocean life horizon depths

Ocean life

A sea of foam and lore,
draped in the beauty of the changing waves.
Woven in threads linked to the strings of the World
above the breaking water.
Beauty deep into the darkest pits of ships fallen,
where the life of the unknown coral calls home and love.
In the depths of the ocean and shore,
life thrives in an endless circle just beyond the
horizon line.

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Average filler poetry, describing a basic atmosphere. There is nothing wrong with the poem, as it is written decently, it just lacks any real personality or identity. I ask (in a respectful manner) what makes this worth reading over all the other poems that say basically the same thing in virtually the same manner?