Night...

• Artist: XD Kyuubin XD
• Description: just another random poem composed by me(who else?) at school during...math...i think....XD hope you like it!!!
• Date: 01/14/2010
• Tags: night

Things to remember
Things to forget
It is hard
Do not fret

I shall help you
Through thick and thin
Just dream of me
Just do a little sin

Then I will appear
When midnight strikes true
I'll lead you to the Night
Away from the blue!

Comments

[Asa Nisi Mese]

For me, the rhythm feel a bit off in the lines "Just do a little sin" and "away from the blue."
Maybe play with the wording or number of syllables so it flows better