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The day before,
did it end with regrets on your mind?
Stuck in your thoughts,
forcing their way to the center of your attention.
The day before did you do a terrible thing?
Does it replay itself until you scream?
Does it sting you soul,
to simply be reminded of it?
Was your day before so wonderful, and joyous
it sends you back to your worst day?
The day you ******** up so horribly
hell seemed peaceful?
The day before is gone,
don't let it consume your thoughts!
If you do your sanity will,
be pushed to the edge.
And that edge will break!
What then?
What will become of your day before?
- by claire_luvs_ya |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2009 |
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- Title: The Day Before.
- Artist: claire_luvs_ya
- Description: I was sitting here and before I knew it i was writing.... It was one of the strangest experiences of my life.... It was like my hand was moving and I wasn't telling it to....
- Date: 12/21/2009
- Tags: before
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Doctor Clarice - 08/08/2010
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I know(;
Just kidding.
Thank you Thalia - Report As Spam
- tebows gurll - 05/15/2010
- perfect claire
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- XxI Love Her ForeverxX - 04/09/2010
- Your a twisted little girl Claire;D
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- redblazeloves - 12/26/2009
- interesting...... i kno what u feel like . i had a poem just like it. however, in my opinion, i was confused on some parts. but then again who am i 2 judge u on something as common as confusion? i liked it
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- Kavi the Kings Mirror - 12/21/2009
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haha ok.
first thing: i absolutely despise spelling errors: so question: is the line intentionally spelled "Does it sting you soul," ?
second: i like how its incredibly random but it fits the entire prose. if you catch what i mean?
third: very thoughtful. i like it. but--sorry to say--i also don't. - Report As Spam
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