Bulletproof

• Artist: Chibi_Phil
• Description: Well its pretty much a poem i wrote when i was feeling down
• Date: 11/18/2009
• Tags: bulletproof

Bulletproof

If I surrendered my heart to you
Would I become bulletproof?
If we spent just one more night
Would we make it worth the time?

Still waiting for the day I wake up
To learn the true meaning of trust.
Trying to escape to a time not frightening.
Being able to leave a ditch with a smile.

Maybe that’s how it should be.
Did I really waste my life away?
Let’s just agree to disagree.
Would I regret what I did?

I just wanted you to be happy.
I’d sell my life just to keep you laughing.
From when we first met
I never felt empty.

Comments

[areyououthere]

okay, i liked the concept of "giving you my heart will make me bulletproof" but the rest of the poem, except for the two starting lines, is crap. prose is not poetry; feeling isn't good enough for poetry; you need to invest some time in learning to portray your feelings in a concrete manner.