a song i mades

• Artist: the rainbow potato freak
• Description: theese are the lyrics
  do not tell meh i has bad grammer i type stupid
  i need typing lessons and i has bad spelling
  i try my best and no one has perfext typin/spellins
• Date: 10/08/2009
• Tags: song mades

EMOTIONS
All theese emotions inside of meh
wich one am i
i cant chose i dont know
am i happy or am i sad?
am i mad or am i in pain?
so many emotions i feel so cunfused
maybe i am cunfused? i wish i knew
but i dont think i ever will
so many emotions bottled up inside of me
why cant i just figure out
wich one i am
maybe im clam maybe im not?
maybe im scared or maybe im feelin smart?
i wish i would know but i cant becuase
i have all theese emotions inside of me
i just cant tell wat i am
maybe im a bunch of them put together
a diffrent of kind of emotion that no one has herd of
that no one but me can have?

Comments

[ItJustTyo]

its a good start, maybe add the chorus after one of the lines where you list off a few emotions. I could see maybe the verses where you question who you are with and what your feeling maybe being the chours (so many emotions i feel so cunfused maybe i am cunfused? i wish i knew but i dont think i ever will so many emotions bottled up inside of me....this part*)