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A young girl stands
in the midst of the firelight
and watches as her home
burns to the ground
Her family screams,
trapped in the fiery ruins
She hears her mothers screams of pain
and she hears her fathers curses
Wide eyed, and ash in her hair
she watches as the roof and walls collapse
and with the rumbling boom
her family's screams are ended
She stands there
as if rooted to the ground
Her tears evaporating in the heat
and the ash drifts like snowfall from her hair
A shadow moves in her vision
and comes to stand beside her
it looks at her for a long while
and than turns and watches the flames with her
She finally turns from the flames
and looks at the figure
The shadow shaped in human grab
Darkness crafted into form
It turns to her
and again studies her in silence
for long moments of time
they face one another in quiet serenity
Then it kneels
and wipes the ash from her hair
it wipes the tears that have long since dried
in the heat of the almighty flames
But the motion itself is comforting
and the intent even more so
and the girl found herself relieve
by those warm hands made of darkness
Standing again
the figure reaches out a hand
and after a few moments hesitation
the young girl takes it
Together
they make their way away from the flames
away from the ashes of girl's past
away from all the pain
from the ashes of the mother that beat her
from the remains of that father drank their lives away
from the arrogant rest that simply sat back
and watch in silence from a far
And thus
the shadow leads her away
away from the past
and the house of pain
The house of pain
that the girl so despised
the house of torture
that the girl herself burned down
- by Richard_theholderoftruth |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/23/2009 |
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- Title: The burning of the past
- Artist: Richard_theholderoftruth
- Description: This poem is only "semi-dark" XP I say "semi" because I was orginally going make this poem alot darker and trust me I emphasize the use of the word ALOT =) enjoy readers.
- Date: 09/23/2009
- Tags: burning past
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Comments (2 Comments)
- gray1436 - 10/01/2009
- like that was deep ur the best ive seen all day.
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- Elousia - 09/24/2009
- I love it.... Good job with it... Though darker could have been better.... 5/5
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