Hollow Insect

• Artist: Dreams-of-Claudia
• Description: This is an abstract poem, so it's really about whatever you make it about. I wrote it because I feeling used.
• Date: 09/07/2009
• Tags: hollow insect

Go fast,
I don't want to feel this.
I just want to feel the shock
Of the aftermath,
Leaving me asking,
"What was that?"
Stay away,
This is my hiding place.
I just want to feel your ghost,
Your chilling presance,
Leaving me asking,
"Why?"
I never wanted this,
But you insisted.
Now I've become this
Hollow insect.
Go fast,
I don't want to feel this.

Comments

[BigMouth12349]

While the message was a little muddled, the poem had a nice... well, beat for lack of a better word. 4/5.

[Takuto_Ginga_Bishounen]

I like it...but I think you are trying to portray one too many concepts for such a short poem, I felt a little lost myself as to what the emotion it was you were trying to portray but it is beautifully written non the less

[Kishin Rinku]

Wow that's awesome.