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What if the sky
dropped snow in june.
What if the sun
became the moon.
What if birds
all chirped the same
What if a new born
was named NoName.
What if the stars
fell down to earth.
What if a man
was meant to give birth.
What if a siren
never goes off.
What if the sickly
never cough.
What if I
was to declare my love.
Would the heavens come crashing
down from high above?
THE END.
- by funky_fresh_13XD |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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- Title: IMMA TITLE THIS LATER!! :3
- Artist: funky_fresh_13XD
- Description: im sorry i dont have a title...i couldnt think of one...but if u guys have ideas just leave a comment..other than that u can still leave a coment ...thank ju!...:3
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: imma title later love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- funky_fresh_13XD - 08/28/2009
- thank you for ur comments...but uh...i think mr.ProfessorKFC(intentional screw up) maybe u should mr insane bloddy tears comments....besides....peotry itself doesnt have to have a total purpose..or meaning...take shel silverstein for example...his poems r complete NON SENSE....but in the end....u finish it and u feel somewhat understanding of that poem...it takes TRUE talent to right like that...anyone can make things "connect"...
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- Head Coffin - 08/28/2009
- I really like it, and understand. your using similar situations to explain that the world doesn't end if you tell someone that you love them. 5/5
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- ProfessorKC - 08/26/2009
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Bunch of statements with no purpose or connection but to say "what if?" and have some contrdictions with reality in each line?
Ummm ... no. - Report As Spam
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