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I lay on my back,
your face above mine.
My breathing is heavy,
and i can see you crying.
A pain in my chest,
my heartbeat so weak.
I reach up my hand,
and wipe tears from your cheek.
Your hand in mine,
I look in your eyes.
I can feel it now,
tearing at human ties.
Deaths embrace closes in,
but i am not afraid.
I am with you after all,
and with you i will stay.
- by CrownClown777 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/11/2009 |
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- Title: Dying love
- Artist: CrownClown777
- Description: Please be honest with your comments...if you think its good, then thank you. If you think its bad...then thank you more, then i will know what to work on...God bless you all and enjoy my words. Thank you
- Date: 08/11/2009
- Tags: dying love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Equux - 09/16/2009
- Its Good 5/5
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- Miss Macki - 08/15/2009
- I ilike it.
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- ll N3k0 Infinity ll - 08/11/2009
- wow, very good. I do think you could be a bit more descriptive in the emotional perspective of it, but still very good.
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