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"A Ghost No More"
i fear to look inside of me and see the thing that's become of me;
black and roiling, oozing rage and deadly things, diseasing my heart;
i thought i hid it well, encased it in steel words of pretty lyric and rhyme;
i'm lying to me again you see to keep the demon at bay, but free;
it bleeds out upon these words you write to ease your pain and mirror mine;
how can i call me friend and be this wretched thing that fester like a...;
no, i won't confess it, i won't let it be recognized as something so real;
it pounds against me as a wave on deadly rock, to lash at my love;
it's turned me, made me a cynical pessimistic crone who's joy is to wallow;
like the swine that comforted Prodigal in his time of selfishness, i writhe;
take my hand, take it now! pull me from this cesspool of spite and loss;
a ghost to me no more will be, please pull me from myself and thus;
cleanse me of myself and all the doubt that spreads within this hopeless shell.
~END~
yes...i realize this has no rhyme...maybe no rythm either. but it is what it is....the dealing with of the demons within. yeah...no caps...i do that. at least this time i gave u some punctuation. please tell me what you think. 3nodding
- by Dragons Willow |
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- | Submitted on 07/13/2009 |
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- Title: Ghost No More
- Artist: Dragons Willow
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sorries if i already posted this....or did i? i can't remember. T^T
i guess it's about having to face who u really are at the depths of ur soul...and then trying to either come to grips with it, accept it, or deny and plead for help to take it away. - Date: 07/13/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- kikster0913 - 07/19/2009
- im srry..................but all i can say is tht i fell in lov wit tha poem at the first 2 verses lol blaugh i already feel a connection wit this poem its deep
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- A t e l i c E n i g m a - 07/16/2009
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i love this 5/5!
i love the beginning.
Write on! - Report As Spam