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Flooded sidewalk;
Wet and runny,
Puddles glitter in the streetlights.
Fresh water trickles down the drain.
This is what happens when it starts to rain.
The sudden roar of thunder,
The occasional flash of light:
This is what happens when it rains at night.
- by CREE MAKES LOVE |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/02/2009 |
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- Title: Rain
- Artist: CREE MAKES LOVE
- Description: Read the poem. :3
- Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: rain
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- Gideon Striche - 09/04/2009
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I like this piece's free structure. I think you could make it better, however, if you played around with the sentences and added some enjambment.
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