Hope

• Artist: The Celestial Archon
• Description: I was going through some life changing things, and thought I was going to loose myself to depression. But I wrote this in math class one day, and every time I look at it , it gives me hope.
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: hope

There is an ocean that seems calm
In reality its full of storms
Full of monstrous foaming waves
In the middle of the ocean is a boat
The boat seems to almost sink in the storms and waves
And yet it doesn't capsize or shatter
It bobs and dips and rides the swell
Yet it stays on coarse going North
How do I know this you may ask
For you see this ocean is my life
And this little boat is my hope.

Comments

[-Tessifer]

I love the metaphor.
It's an amazing poem.
10 stars.

[3 IVI 0]

This is a great metaphor and I love this.

Normally I don't love anything unless I can feel a flowing rhythm and good rhymes. That should tell you that this is really a great piece here.