Silver & Grey an Emo poem

• Artist: Loverly_Bones
• Description: i wrote this during my emo stage last year
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: silver grey poem

The blade, it cuts,
It's silver and grey.
It burns, the cuts
On my arms and legs.
I wish it would all,
Just go away.
I lay to wait, for
Death it arrives.
The blade, it cuts,
It's silver and grey.

Comments

[Kittycquariana]

I was wondering if it was just free verse. The poem seemed to lack any sort of rhythm or flow to go with. It also wasn't the most creative thing in the world, so a 3/5.