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Day in and day out
I’m struggling but I can’t do anything about it
What do you do about it? Nothing
I witness you mocking at me, amused of my torture…
I haven’t seen myself in a while. What do I look like?
I’m a pack mule… stinky…filthy as dirt, retching as foul filth attack me;
I notice scorpions around me…I’m horrified,
what do you do about it, nothing.
Your making me do all of these nonsense tasks dusk and day;
Having me dig loads of dark brown soil; tiredly up & down
now soft like mud; thanks for the rain
It feels like paste, but it sticks to me like glue on my warm velvety skin
Nonstop; I dig until my body aches,
Now, I’m standing here… motionless, what do you do about it? You beat me…
- by Pretty purple bubbles |
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- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: Nothing
- Artist: Pretty purple bubbles
- Description: This is a Poem which is about this Woman. Her husband is abusing her and he is making her do all sorts of Hard Labor. So, she is frustrated and she can't find a way out of the situation. But beware, as this poem is a very gloomy poem.
- Date: 06/14/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- LightsPoet - 06/17/2009
- interesting ^^ I find it gloomy but it is very nice
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- Eaker Squeaker - 06/16/2009
- meh... :p
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- Angelslayer Blasphemy - 06/16/2009
- It has a nice base and flow... but it needs a small bit of grammar editing... Other than that, I say great job. biggrin
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