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I.
I'm on the edge,
living...
breathing...
close to falling...
II.
I can feel myself -
teetering...close to
exhaustion,
close to escape.
III.
I realize that you are there,
that you were just passing by.
It took me a moment...
to understand that you are
on the edge
just like me,
and that you were there
the whole time.
IV.
Swaying precariously,
on the edge,
we exchange pleasentries,
the usual 'hellos',
some background information
on ourselves.
V.
You are older than me,
just over twenty years my senior,
but we can relate,
in so many ways.
VI.
We talk...
gradually, we become friends,
and we both continue our discussions,
both continue pretending that we're
okay, that we aren't going to fall
into the chasm below.
VII.
Then, one day, you stretch out your hand,
reach for my hand,
and entwine your fingers in mine...
and you ask, with your eyes reflecting your need
to be saved,
"Will you pull me back before I fall?"
I answer with a firm,
"Yes,"
and pull you back away from the edge.
VIII.
You have changed,
but in a good way;
your life has been saved by me,
and I have prevented the
tragedy that would have occured...
and you are more alive than ever.
IX.
I look over the edge,
and you talk to me as I wonder
when I am going to fall...
I heard things from my father
that I wish I had never heard;
gravity starts to tip me forward.
X.
Just as I am about to fall,
you grab me and pull me back,
taking me yards and yards away from the edge,
from the precarious drop.
"You are my friend; you saved me
when I was going to fall,"
you say, "and I love you...
and I was here to save you before you dropped."
- by Chaotic_Theoretician |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/14/2009 |
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- Title: Drop
- Artist: Chaotic_Theoretician
- Description: This is a poem I wrote--an experiment with a new writing style--and I'm actually really pleased with how it came out, considering that it started out about how I am/was teetering on the edge of insanity...but then it transitioned into how I pulled someone back from the edge, and, in turn, they've done the same.
- Date: 06/14/2009
- Tags: drop friendship love savior dependence
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Comments (7 Comments)
- KuraNingyou - 08/02/2009
- OMG Iheartthisthisisamazing! I'm not really a poem person, I only like quality. Must mean you are amazing then huh.
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- Doctor DooWeeDoo - 06/17/2009
- u really should write more poems like that. 3nodding
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- Spiffy_Lulla_Bye - 06/16/2009
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It's just as good the fourth time I've read it <333
Lovely and very meaningful work,Wolfie~ - Report As Spam
- AmazonCamel123 - 06/15/2009
- ooohhh...a lot better than the garbage most poets put out into our Barnes & Nobles.
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- BloodyLaughter - 06/15/2009
- I loved it, hopefully I can read more of your poems. They were truly wonderful.
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- Bloodsoakedbutterfly - 06/14/2009
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stanza 7 line 2 be = me?
whoever u wrote this for should be very proud it is a great work of art if you haven't shown this to them you should keep writing and tell me next time you post
in my openion the poems that tell stories of people important to us seem to be the best ones we write - Report As Spam
- Nyxs_Ace - 06/14/2009
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VII has a miss spelling it should be me not be.....
other than that great - Report As Spam