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speed.
the wind is picking up
we're drifting away
a feather falling from a nest
slowly.
falling.
you're the feather.
i remain, watching you sink
but to help you i need to hurt you
stop.
go.
i'm the worst mother of the year
you're just a confused child
you need guidence
stand.
fly.
you go west
i'll head out east
let's meet back in a year
drift.
- by jolt_ julia |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/10/2009 |
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- Title: Drifting
- Artist: jolt_ julia
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Description:
i know it's not great or anything but i just want feedback. Can you relate to it at all? Have any advise? critism? nice uber coolio comments? Have something intresting to say that has nothing whatever to do with poetry or writing?
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: drifting friends nature
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dwiinkiin Kitsune - 06/13/2009
- *snaps and cries a tear* very good
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- xTechnicolor Yawn - 06/11/2009
- I like your poem :]
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- jolt_ julia - 06/10/2009
- thankyou :]
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- kitsunexxx - 06/10/2009
- um... im not sure if i can relate to it but i definitely like it
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