rusty razor

• Artist: sexy-RAWRZ-ya
• Description:
• Date: 06/07/2009
• Tags: rusty razor

...A locked door,
A rusty razor,
A towel stained with red,
A folded note on the floor,
A young girl lays there dead,
She tried to get through her life,
The best way she could,
The only way she could,
To save her friends,
She killed herself,
But i wont turn out like that,
Now that i see what i might become,
Im gonna turn around,
Im gonna do this right,
Tonight,
Here....I....Come,

Comments

[emmywinner56]

i think it's a pretty good poem.the feeling behind it is really true and good. and to saturnnightshade,if you're saying your sister cuts herself and you yell at her, then that's really stupid. i'm not saying you should be encouraging her to do that, not at all, but yelling at her just gives her more reason to cut herself harder and deeper.

[saturnnightshade]

This is nice, my sister does that stuff and I yell at her for it...really good poem though~

[LovelyPoetress]

This made me cry. crying
The poem isn't very good, though.

[twistedpersonality_0_0_]

this is good... i love it... exactly what i'm going through... thx