Moondrops

• Artist: Regal Offence
• Description: I wanted to do a short poem, read it twice aloud. Enjoy.
• Date: 05/09/2009
• Tags: moon starts wanted welcome tears

on this night
the stars,
swirling around the moon,
are tears.
you're not welcome here.

Comments

[StarLight_Angel_07]

Its pretty short alrighty!

[Celtic_Warrioress]

I like the description of the stars and moon. The You're not welcome here after the pretty description of the stars just seems very curt , but for no apprent reason. Maybe 'You're something or rather...is not welcome here."