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I can feel myself
Relaxing as the water
Rushes past my feet
Birds voice their beauty
As they are gliding over
Touching the tree tops
As I look into
The river water’s mirror
I can see clearly
At night in the plains
The crickets practice their songs
Mating melodies
The stars shine so bright
Heaven can’t be miles away
For it is right here
- by PerfectionStandard |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2009 |
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- Title: Nature Haiku
- Artist: PerfectionStandard
- Description: A haiku about nature.
- Date: 05/01/2009
- Tags: nature haiku
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Deadlylight6 - 10/02/2010
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first, i want to thank you! why? so far out of all the haikus ive read here, yours is the only one of wat the original haiku style is made for, nature!! ^_^
secondly, the last haiku, the line "Heaven cant..." miles is two syllables so that would make the line into 8 syllables. - Report As Spam
- Yuram Jahad - 05/06/2009
- nice^^
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- CuTi3_aNa - 05/02/2009
- VeRy NiCe =)
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- UC Poika - 05/01/2009
- wonderful i love haiku
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