All I can give

• Artist: Richard_theholderoftruth
• Description: This is a poem again I wrote along time ago, one of many again I'm working on transfering
• Date: 04/29/2009
• Tags: give

All I have to give you
is an old withered rose...


I am not god
I cannot give you the world
I cannot give you the skies above
nor the ground beneath your feet

I am not wealthy
I cannot afford expensive gifts
I cannot buy all your heart desires
All those worldly things you dream of

I am not powerfull
I cannot give you a postion of previlage
I cannot make you a Queen
nor the ruler of a nation

Nor can I promise you
the happiness you may seek
for I am only a man
Bound to commit the worst of sins

All I have give you
is this body of mine
this heart of mine
and this soul of mine....Along with an old withered rose

Comments

[Killa-Keyblade Master-]

"nor the ground beneath you feet". Work on the spelling, make sure that no errors are in these before you submit. I hate to be harsh, because I really wanted to give this a 5/5, but because of spelling errors, I'll give it a 4/5. Good job though, that means if you correct your spelling, you have prime artwork on your hands there buddy. Good job, post more!