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When the sun sets
The sky will glow
The day is ending
And it's letting us know
The sky Glows Orange
It hits the water
Which reflects the color of the sky
While sparkles dance with one another
When the sun sets
The view is beautiful
It warms up your heart
It's so lovable
The sun is now...
Almost out of view
It's setting
Making room for the moon
The Sky is now darken
And the moon is way up high
Your waiting for the break of dawn
When the sun rises up onto the sky
- by Vaniila B l o s s o m |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/04/2009 |
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- Title: Sunset
- Artist: Vaniila B l o s s o m
- Description: I wrote this in class, so If it sucks Don't kill me *hides*
- Date: 04/04/2009
- Tags: sunset
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Touketsu-x-Tsuki - 04/08/2009
- Kill you?! Are u kidding!? This poem is beautiful! Nice work! biggrin
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- wildflower2828 - 04/07/2009
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in this line: "The Sky is now darken" you should change is to has or take off the "en" in darken
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- acellis - 04/05/2009
- im sorry some one ealse was in my chare. Your pome was apsolutly beautiful!!!!
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