My Sad Fate

• Artist: Eros Deium
• Description: This is a piece i recently wrote in longing for another but alas she is taken. I drew my insperation for this one mainly from more of E.A.P's later works in which he is his most miserable. Enjoy my friends and please rate nicely ^.^
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: fate

My breath comes out in a thick fog
My finger tips clench around the sharp tool
In the clockwork of hell, I’m just another cog
I’ve endured it all, but no longer will I be the fool.

The blood drips so elegantly on the sink and past
I’ll scratch a note in the crimson stain
Lost and demoralized these few seconds are my last
I’ll forget it all now, rid my self of this evil pain

My muscles give out, as I collapse to the floor
My mind is lost in a euphoric state
The agony was far to great to store
By the time they find me it’ll be too late

The pain just dissipates
This was my sad fate.

Comments

[TOP00009]

Lovely poem deary. Relation is absolute.

[xXninjabatXx]

This is absolutely wonderful! I can relate completely. Great job!

[cooll666725]

Very good. XD I write poems as well take a look at mine sometime. ^_^ Specifically this one, "Blood Drips".
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101022245#title

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

Omg thats so sweet and miserable.
I loved it.
Its deep and yet had a meaning so true and so touching it hurts and makes u feel the pain.

Keep writing it really rocks.