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I'm lying in a pool of blood,
reaching for your hand.
But you refuse to help,
and stalk off into the night.
My tears begin to flood,
as I sink into the sand.
Falling into hell,
where shadows conquer light.
And you will never be there.
All I do is stop and stare.
A man so heartless;
Love is unrequited
- by Malevolent_Midnight |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Malevolent_Midnight - 08/10/2009
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wow, thnx!!
never had such good comments before - Report As Spam
- Xx_Ookami_xXx_Fang_xX - 08/05/2009
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great job with the rhyming!
i can never seem to make things like those poems rhyme....
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- Reprogrammed - 03/22/2009
- Yes, I do hate it when people look away in my time of need. It really pisses me off. 5/5
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- rocko11091 - 03/20/2009
- very nicely done...love the similar rhyme scheme in the first two stanza's...4/5
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- iiReina - 03/19/2009
- awesome poem! biggrin D 5/5
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