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the bird was graceful
as it took flight off the ground
to return to home
- by marshall11 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/16/2009 |
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- Title: (haiku) birdy fly home
- Artist: marshall11
- Description: this is a haiku i wrote at a school for a project for those who doesnt know what a haiku is its a poem that does not ryme its mostly about nature and the first line has 5 syllables the next line 7 syllables and the last 5 syllables
- Date: 03/16/2009
- Tags: haiku
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 03/17/2009
- MAN! HAIKUS ARE HARD! I tried doing one myself once.... Great job, man! Keep on Keepin' on!
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- Purlicue - 03/16/2009
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Umm,I've never heard of a Haiku but all i know is that you put 'to' twice on the last line.
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