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Falling down
This well of lies
They are laughing
At all my demise
Wounds of flesh
Always heal
Wounds of heart
Never seal
Tired of gambling
This life away
Sick of selling
This soul to say
Lies abundant
Prayers so many
truths little
Answers vary
Hearts dormant
Brains failing
Love is loveless
Thoughts flailing
Shattered soul
Lifeless eyes
Days are cruel
Heartless cries
- by Niji Rose Getsuei |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/15/2009 |
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- Title: lies
- Artist: Niji Rose Getsuei
- Description: my fourth post, enjoy
- Date: 03/15/2009
- Tags: lies
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- Spade6sic6 - 03/22/2009
- fairly nice. try mixing up your syllables a bit more and occasionally follow a different stanza pattern. In stead of ABCB ABCB ABCB, try ABCBB ABABCB AABB AABCCB and other mixes like that. you would be amazed at how much better your poems would read. i like yours though. ^^
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