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In that forgotten part of town
Where wasted hopes and dreams abound,
A wrinkled man with life near end,
In hopes to have at least one friend,
Fashioned bits of wood and things
And made a puppet run by strings.
He sat alone for hours on end,
Conversing with his only friend
And found delight within the fact
That he controlled it's every act.
He told it how he never had
A chance, since all his luck was bad
Although he'd tried so to succeed -
The puppet nodded and agreed.
And how his journeys in romance
Had never given him a chance,
And wasn't it a crying shame
That he was always held to blame
When everyone knew, oh so well,
That life is but a living Hell,
Controlled by lust and power and greed?
The puppet nodded and agreed.
With patience that would rival saints,
That puppet sat through all complaints
And, with each little expert tug,
He'd droop his head or bow or shrug
And give some comfort to the man
Who held his lifelines in his hand
And helped to fill a lonely need
When he just nodded and agreed.
Senility increased with time
As did the old man's pantomime,
And feverish fingers pulled with glee
The puppet's dance of misery.
They never left each other's side
Until the day both stopped and died.
We found them lying, hand in hand,
The puppet - and his wooden friend.
- by XxXBleeding_RainbowXxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/15/2009 |
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- Title: The Puppet
- Artist: XxXBleeding_RainbowXxX
- Description: Ha ha, I'd rather people try to figure out the meaning of this one. It's entertaining to know what other people think it is about. Whomever figures it out will get a donation from me. =)
- Date: 03/15/2009
- Tags: puppet poem asher donations gold
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Comments (6 Comments)
- koigirl - 11/29/2009
- ita about a lonely manwith out a friend or one to call his own so he works hard to make one that will always be with him, his only friend the puppet until the day he dies that puppet lives and with out the old man the puppet's lost it's meaning? idk if thats not it but i tried
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- chidorilash - 03/27/2009
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I love this poem!
But my guess is about....*thinks* Random guess but is it about a relationship that one person thought they controlled the other when in actuality they did not?.....I know I'm wrong, but that's what I get out of it ,-,.....Keep up the good work though^^ - Report As Spam
- Cl3v3rRey - 03/25/2009
- I GET IT!
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- Lady Venibeth - 03/15/2009
- I'm terrible at riddles. But I think it's great.
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- Pikarat - 03/15/2009
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Hmm? It is either about a man who is dieing. Or a man who can not find a lover because of his sexuality.
Just random gueses.
It is very beautiful, I love it! - Report As Spam