time and ages

• Artist: power dude13
• Description: another poem but this one is about the passing of time.
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: time ages castles feudal

young and old, warm and cold
but no matter the time theres always the past.

you see it in castles, when they were held bye vassals
but when we look another time we know it has completely passed.

and so we look in books, its escaped our hooks
and now we find that those times were unsurpassed.

Comments

[Salornix]

You didn't exactly put much effort into the Grammar and spelling, so I'll give it a 3/5