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You were a lie
You made me die
I hated you so
Just go away
You are a pain
I had to be slain
You were too late
Just jump over a bay
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- Artist: iTakiz
- Description: came up with this also
- Date: 02/22/2009
- Tags: untitled
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Comments (3 Comments)
- runescape_freak711 - 05/14/2009
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no there not "supposed 2 be simple"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there supposed 2 show feeling.
but all i see in yours is...
nothing.
if u hate me now
get over it!! - Report As Spam
- iTakiz - 02/22/2009
- If it gonna critisize some1 go away it poems r long but boring poems r supposed to be simple
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/22/2009
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Pretty weak. So plain and painful to read. I mean "You were a lie
You made me die" You know how simple this is? A 5 year old could write better. It is so simplistic and unoriginal. - Report As Spam
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