Your what I love to hate!

• Artist: kisa29
• Description: I love writting poetry and i am a published poet. I have a poem that was published in a book a couple of years ago at the age of eleven! I wrote this piece when my ex broke up with me, he dated me for two months, broke up, got back together, then broke up two more months later again. I will add more poems later on so enjoy ^^
• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: your love hate

I wish i could go back in time to undo those thingd i've done,
i wish i can go back and take those words back that i had said to you
I wish i could make everything right again
I wish i could go back and take those words that i have said and say them again
I wish i could go back and re-do those things that i had done
DO you see what you do to me?
I loved you at first but that love turned to hate
For all those heartaches I went through while i was with you, you deserve all of it
You are what I love to hate.....

Comments

[Zurah]

It's too syllable-heavy.

Give it some rhythm.