Let's Trade Shoe Size

• Artist: Edward Trivusky IV
• Description: I recently lost someone who I thought was my friend. Apparently not. If she had told the truth earlier, maybe it wouldn't have hurt so bad.
  
  A word to everyone: Tell the truth even if you're scared, are afraid of hurting someone, or might get in trouble. Chances are if you tell sooner than later, things will be better. It hurts less that way for everyone.
• Date: 01/25/2009
• Tags: lets trade shoe size

I wish you'd see the world through another's eyes.
Let's get all mixed up,
and trade shoe size,
because maybe then,
you'd see how it is in other people's lives.

Sometimes I wish we could just compromise,
forget all the dirty lies,
never have to say goodbyes.
I'm wishing we could have remained allies.

I'm hoping that maybe you could revise,
those twisted, dirty lies.
Lies we all despise.
Maybe some day instead of planning one another's demise,
we could give rise,
to another suprise.

Maybe someday we won't have to live under a guise.
We could live in harmony under the same blue skies.
That way nobody cries,
and we wouldn't have to break off all our ties.

Its so sad when a friendship dies,
all because of dirty, twisted lies.
Guess with one of us the shoe size,
is just too oversized.

Comments

[ShePotterGleek]

this is really good
very ryme-y though

[-x- Fridge -x-]

I really like this. Good job.
When I read the description first, about how it was about losing friendship, I almost didn't read it because I thought it was going to be another cliche friendship poem, but it wasn't good job. ;]

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

I like this a lot.