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Falling apart not knowing if should run or hide.How would you feel if I just died?
Crying inside but not sheading a tear.
Crying inside hope someone comes fast. Dieing inside how long will my life last?
Falling apart inside not knowing where to turn. Im falling apart inside will you ever see the pain that lurks inside me?
- by Dark Angel 2201 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: Falling Apart
- Artist: Dark Angel 2201
- Description: Dedicated to all lost souls in this big bad world...
- Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: falling apart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- I IS BACON - 03/30/2009
- it's good
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- l_Shamrock_l - 01/22/2009
- I'd say seperate the lines a bit more. It looks a bit overstretched the way it's formatted, though that's not exactly a hit against the writing itself.
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- X_Midnight_Wind_X - 01/11/2009
- that's really good keep writing ^^
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- sumomoplum335 - 01/10/2009
- pretty good, but u have some grammar and spelling errors
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