My last sight

• Artist: 0_Hello Kitty_0
• Description:
• Date: 01/08/2009
• Tags: last sight

The clouds were as grey as smoke

The night sky was like a tar pit with glitter boiling in it.

The grass was wet like tears

The moon was a partially broken heart

My soul lifted off like a dreamers dream

I reached the smoke, reached for the tar, slipped off the tears, && landed on

the broken heart.

Comments

[Thorn Of The Sky]

This was very good,it makes you think and wonder what it all means.And it makes me think of what you were feeling when you wrote this,its very good,it makes me feel like giving you a 10/5!!

[Xx_BrokenCrystal_xX]

That was very beautiful. I like you poems, you should write more of them, Even if they are sad...